Year: 2023

Honor – Persuasive Writing

Let me tell you about hismile, hismile is a brand of toothpaste.

I think you should buy it cause it has a very cheap price and

there’s lots of flavours to pick and it makes your teeth white.

 

Hismile has lots of different flavours like prime,watermelon, 

red velvet cake,cotton candy,smooth mint,mango sorbet,

this encourages children to want to brush their teeth.

 

They sell it at the chemist warehouse for a very cheap price so it is affordable for families.

 

Hismile also has a teeth whitening toothpaste it is

purple if you leave it on for 30 seconds it will make

your teeth pearly white.

 

I think you should buy hismile toothpaste because it taste delicious and it feels amazing 

And refreshing. Hopefully after reading this you will go and buy some hismile toothpaste today

 

 

 

 

The Missing girl named Lily peters

One night it was 3AM in the forest there was a girl named Lily.

She was walking home from church but then she came across

A cemetery. She saw her grandpa but she knew something was off,

because her grandpa died when she was three. She ran off frightened!!!!

She thought she was going crazy, but then everything stopped. 

She saw a white van pull up and it was her mum but her mum looked weird.

Her face was ripped…….

 It was not her mum!!!!!

 

She got scared and ran into the forest few weeks later her mum put up 

Missing posters for her, she had gone missing!!! For a while but Lily 

Had been missing for years and it she will never be found again 

I think