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I went to the park and saw some kids that looked my age they were nice and we

Played for a couple of  hours and then it was the after noon and then we went to the butter chicken place and ate then we went home and went to sleep and then i Heard a noise from outside it sounded like one of the girls  from the park that i Played with she was crying and i woke up my uncle and Auntie and they Brote Her inside the house her clothing was Dirty and her face was dirty to and her Hair was messed up and we gave her a drink of water to stop her from crying And made her some food and called her mum and dad they picked her up from My uncle and aunties house and then the next morning they came to thank us And after they thanked us they we ate breakfast and went for a walk up Mount wellington and we headed home and ate lunch we and i played a Soccer game for a little bit with my uncle an he told us we were going to Rainbows end we went on roller coasters for a little bit and went to the zoo We saw lions an tigers spiders an pumas an zebras and monkeys and we Went to the pools and swam for a couple of minutes and went back home And had a  little sleep and the time we woke up it was dinner time we ate Pasta and then went back to sleep and then in the morning it we went for A other walk up mount wellington we went home again to eat lunch and Went to park for a little play and then went to the lake for a dive in there And went home it was night when we got back  and went to sleep And i heard a noise from out i looked out the window and could’t Believe what i saw it was a ewolf that was hurt it had bite Marks the bite marks looked like a tiger bite and brote it inside And gave it a bowl of water it was ok the next morning me and my Uncle took it to the doctors and  it was ok and we a to release it backIn the wild and it was sad but it had to go back to its family in the wild

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